Outer Confines
by Eric Priezkalns
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(c) Eric Priezkalns 2012
Black Space
The sound of a man's breathing fills an undefined black space.
The face of clean-shaven man, Bill, emerges from the side of
frame. There is a sound of wind rushing by. The camera tracks back
to show more of his head. Different-coloured lights dance across Bill's
face. The camera rotates to reveal he is falling, face downward, with his
long dark hair blown backwards behind him.
Bill (v.O.)
I think I had the idea I was being born. It was bloody and messy and dangerous.
Desert - Day
Day 1.
Bill lies motionless in a full-body suit, his face upward,
his body twisted, in a crater of sand. The suit's visor is tinted; we
cannot see his face. He suddenly and violently sits upright. He
jerks his hand towards his face.
From inside the helmet we hear the sound of Bill's breathing
and see his gloved hand rap startlingly against the visor. The view turns
from side to side. It is a barren desert expanse, with no signs of
civilization.
Bill extends his legs whist remaining seated. He leans
forward, bending double, putting an arm to his torso.
BILL
(half-screams, half-groans with agonizing pain)
He remains seated in that pose for a while, not moving
again. He is silent. Then Bill's suit slowly, mechanically, gets to
its feet. It walks away, with a steady, methodical stride. It walks
in a perfectly straight line into the distance.
DESERT - DAY
Day 2.
The suit walks across desert. It walks across
rocks. It keeps walking with the same perfectly straight and methodical
gait.
The suit climbs an escarpment. It interrupts its ascent
to sit on a boulder.
Inside the suit's helmet, we see Bill's face. We hear
his breathing. He sips water from a tube by his mouth.
From behind the visor we look up at the sky. The sky is
coloured pink. There are two suns; one is about to set. The visor
turns and surveys the land from this relative high point. There is an
alteration of the colour of its filters, turning the sky more blue and the sand
less orange. Bill looks up. There are faint wisps of white
cloud.
Bill's rest is interrupted by a deep and sonorous woman's voice.
Suit
Are you ready?
BILL
I'm ready. Let's get moving.
The suit gets to its feet and proceeds with its
journey.
Bill and the suit continue their conversation as the suit walks.
BILL
How do you feel now?
SUIT
I am fine.
BILL
How far do you think we'll get today?
SUIT
I estimate we will advance by approximately twenty kilometres.
BILL
That's not very much.
SUIT
You are not very well. We can do more once you
heal. You were quite ill.
Corridor - Night
A corridor is lit only by the light coming from the edges of
the door frame at the far end. Bill stands naked at the near end, his
back turned to us, facing towards the door. We hear the sound of him
breathing in his suit. His breathing is heavy and rhythmic, like he is
deeply asleep. Bill walks to the door, and opens it. The bright
light from behind the door blinds us.
DESERT - DAY
We see Bill's face from the side, inside the helmet. He has stubble. His breathing is laboured. Bill splutters awake. We can see spots of blood on the inside of his visor.
Day 4.
Bill is laying on the ground. The sun is rising,
casting long shadows.
SUIT
Your internal bruising is less severe today.
BILL
Maybe so. But explain that to my aching ribs. How
far do we have to go today?
SUIT
Your target for today is to walk thirty-five kilometres.
BILL
Is that how far you walked yesterday?
SUIT
Yes.
BILL
Okay. I'd better get going. You rest.
Recharge your batteries, so to speak.
Bill gets up from the ground. He walks away from the
camera, into the desert. He is noticeably limping, and his strides are
somewhat irregular. An "X" of solar panels unfold from the back of the
suit. They are fragile, like gossamer. They were battered by the
accident. The panels look like a cross between dragonfly and fairy wings.
Bill keeps walking, this time toward the camera from a
distance. As he gets to the camera, we can tell from how Bill moved in
the frame that he was not walking a perfectly straight line, sometimes
appearing more to the left, sometimes more to the right of the frame.
BILL
I'm sorry. How far have we gone?
A graphic is projected on the interior of the suit
visor. It shows a schematic of the journey from their crash site to their
destination, a city by the sea. The graphic then zooms to the portion of
their journey which is to be covered that day. Whilst the planned route
is shown as a perfectly straight line, Bill's actual steps are projected as a
line that meanders around it. Alongside the line a reading is given,
stating that 3,017 metres have been covered.
SUIT
We are doing well. We have completed three kilometres
now.
BILL
Don't lie to me. That's not doing well.
(Pauses)
I'm sorry. Do you think we'll make it?
SUIT
I'm sorry Bill. I will never lie to you. There is
a lot further to go. I cannot confidently predict our chances of success.
BILL
Just give me your best guess.
SUIT
The odds are fifty-fifty.
A new visor graphic is shown. The left half shows "50%"
in green, the right half shows "50%" in red. Underneath them are written
the words "likelihood of success" and "likelihood of failure" respectively.
BILL
Well, the odds won't improve if I just stand here.
Bill walks on.
Bill approaches an outcrop of rocks. He stops as he gets close. From the perspective of the helmet visor, through its coloured filter, there is a green smear of moss across one of the rocks.
BILL
Is it life?
SUIT
I cannot tell. My bio-detectors have been destroyed,
and I have limited data about the native ecosystems of this planet.
BILL
There's atmosphere. I don't need technology to tell me
when I'm walking into the wind.
SUIT
The atmosphere has no oxygen but it might sustain plant life.
BILL
I hope there's more life on this rock than just aliens like
us. Life makes this war worth fighting.
SUIT
Would you like to rest for a while?
BILL
(emphatic)
No. No, I shouldn't stop like this. Let's press
on.
Bill starts walking again, in silence.
SUIT
You should keep talking. It will help you stay
motivated.
BILL
Maybe so, but you're not exactly a great conversationalist
either.
SUIT
I do not practice often.
BILL
When was it, that we last spoke?
SUIT
Before this mission, we last spoke seventeen years ago.
BILL
You know, I'm sorry, but I didn't ask your name and I can't
remember what it was... is.
SUIT
I do not have a name.
CORRIDOR - NIGHT
As before, Bill stands naked in the corridor facing towards
the door frame and the light that seeps from behind it. He walks to the
door and opens it. It opens on to the glare of the desert. We look
over Bill's shoulder at the ground. He sees himself lying there, naked,
huddled in a fetal position, his skin smeared with blood. The camera
turns around to look back at the Bill who came through the door, but his face
has been replaced with the suit's darkened visor. It is looking down at
Bill's body, and then it abruptly raises its head to look at the horizon.
Pausing for a second, it then mechanically marches away, stepping over the legs
of Bill's body as it passes him.
DESERT - DAY
Inside the helmet, we see Bill is jolted awake by one of the
steps taken by the suit.
BILL
What happened?
SUIT
You passed out.
BILL
How long?
SUIT
You were unconscious for fifteen minutes. I kept
walking so we would still reach today's target before nightfall.
BILL
Let me walk again, you don't have the energy.
SUIT
You don't have the energy either. You should not push
yourself too hard.
BILL
I can do it. I'm feeling better.
The suit stops walking momentarily. It stands
motionless for a few seconds. Bill starts walking again, with his
limp. The camera pans up to the sky. Daylight fades into a night
sky, dotted with stars. The camera pans down to see the suit lying flat
on the ground, face upwards, staring at the sky. The stars are reflected
in the visor.
Desert - Night
Inside the suit helmet, we see Bill sipping on the water
tube. He licks his dry lips. He lies still, looking at the
stars.
Then Bill is alerted by something.
BILL
Can you hear something?
SUIT
No.
BILL
Maybe it's an animal.
SUIT
If there is animal nearby, I cannot hear it. However,
it is unlikely that there is an animal nearby. The atmosphere would not
support any known animal lifeform, and we have seen no evidence of animal life
up to now.
BILL
Tell me about this planet's atmosphere.
SUIT
It is 90% nitrogen, 10% carbon dioxide, and small amounts of
water vapour and noble gases. Atmospheric pressure is 93% of spaceship
standard.
BILL
So I could walk around with just a breathing mask and oxygen
source?
SUIT
Yes, but you do not have a breathing mask.
BILL
Don't get jealous. I'm just saying.
There is silence.
BILL
I'm cold.
SUIT
There is no spare energy remaining in my store. There
is only enough to keep the recyclers running.
BILL
What about the leak?
SUIT
I cannot locate it. My detectors are barely
functional. However, the recycler is compensating enough, so long as it
keeps working at full capacity.
BILL
Did you ever wish on a star?
SUIT
(Pauses)
No.
From inside, we see Bill pulling his arms out of the sleeves
of the suit, and folding them around his chest, trying to keep warm. He
scratches his shoulder with one hand. He then brings it down and
scratches his balls and around his pelvis. He then puts his arms back
into the sleeves of his suit, and gropes around in the front pocket of his suit.
SUIT
What are you doing?
BILL
I'm going to take a photograph. Play me some
music. Something old, and fitting.
SUIT
Alright.
The suit plays Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata. Bill lifts
the camera up to the visor. We see the stars through the camera's
viewfinder, then pan upwards from the viewfinder to look at them
directly. Their movements become rapid; we see the stars rolling across
the sky. Into the starlit darkness emerges Bill's face, stubbled.
His hair is blown by the wind, like it was in the opening shot. We
completely circle his head and as we pass the back of his head a second time,
instead of stars, we see a nighttime cityscape over his shoulder. The
city is composed of a circular ring of evenly-spaced towers, floating upon
water. In the foreground of the city, Bill's head rises from the
water. He has an audibly sharp intake of breath. He throws his neck
backwards, spraying the water from his long hair. Bill takes his long
hair in his hands and wrings it, walking out of the water and pacing towards
the city's shore. The city's lights dance across Bill's face as he runs
on to its beach. He stumbles and falls, his hand clenching into a ball of
sand. There he lays, not trying to get up again. Instead, he curls
his naked body into a ball.
DESERT - DAY
Bill is walking.
Day 8.
Suit
Talk to me, Bill.
Bill
I don't have anything to say.
Suit
You can talk about anything.
BILL
Very well. Do you know Shakespeare? I can think
of a piece that's very fitting.
(Pauses)
Tomorrow, and tomorrow, and tomorrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day,
To the last syllable of recorded time;
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,
And then is heard no more: it is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing.
Suit
That was rather gloomy, Bill.
Bill
Then blame the author, not the player.
DESERT - DAY
SUIT
Wake up.
Inside the helmet, Bill's eyes open, and he shakes his head
as he awakens. His stubble has turned into the beginnings of a beard.
Day 11.
SUIT
Time to go. Come on.
Bill, who was wrapped into a ball, now flips on to his
back. He lifts himself up momentarily, but then lays back again.
BILL
What's our chances of making it?
SUIT
Still 50-50, if we stay on our current schedule.
BILL
Is there a quicker route to the city?
SUIT
We are walking in a straight line.
BILL
I know, but maybe there's some other way we've not thought of?
SUIT
We are going the most direct route.
BILL
And there's been no signal? You've still been checking?
SUIT
The radio antenna is likely ruined. However, I do keep
checking at regular intervals. There has been no signal. They most
probably assumed all were lost.
BILL
You're right. There's no point complaining. We
just need to keep walking.
SUIT
I walk today. It is my turn.
BILL
Then why didn't you just let me sleep?
The suit pauses for a long time, as if it needs to give a
great deal of consideration to Bill's question.
SUIT
My movements would probably wake you anyway...
(pauses)
...and for the company.
The suit walks. After a long while, Bill breaks the
silence.
BILL
You should have a name.
SUIT
What name?
BILL
A rose by any other name... I'm going to call you "Rose", if
you don't mind.
SUIT
No, I don't mind.
CORRIDOR - NIGHT
As before, Bill stands naked in the corridor facing
towards the door frame and the light that seeps from behind it. He
walks to the door and opens it. We look over his shoulder and the door
opens on to the city in the early morning. We hear his breathing in the
suit, and then he walks past the camera, wearing the suit, walking with his
limp. A wispy fog clings to the ground. The city is deserted apart
from Bill.
BILL
Hello, is anyone here?
He keeps looking, but there is nobody to be seen.
BILL
Hello! Is there anybody?
(Pauses)
Did we walk all this way for nothing? Have they
attacked here too? Is everybody dead?
Bill keeps looking, stumbling, ever more panicked, through the city's empty walkways.
BILL
(Shouting) Hello! There has to be somebody here!
SUIT
Bill, I'm here with you.
DESERT - DAY
Day 15.
The suit is walking, in its methodical and mechanical way.
BILL
When and if we get back, what will happen to you?
SUIT
Because I'm damaged? I imagine they will throw the body
away, because it is so badly damaged.
BILL
You'll get a new one?
SUIT
Yes, of course.
BILL
A better one?
Suit
I expect so.
BILL
What... will they keep? Just the brain?
SUIT
Plus about a metre of secondary column and a few subunits.
BILL
And they just plug you into a new suit?
SUIT
I expect so. Maybe they will plug me into something
else. But my brain was designed for suits.
BILL
But your brain could be plugged into anything?
SUIT
Anything compatible.
Bill goes silent. He sips from the water tube, and
pulls a face at its disgusting taste, as the suit keeps marching forwards.
SUIT
What are you thinking about?
BILL
Nothing.
SUIT
Oh.
BILL
Why are you here? Why did you agree to come with
me? I hadn't even spoken to you in seventeen years.
SUIT
Why shouldn't I come?
BILL
Because you have rights. Because you're intelligent.
SUIT
So do you. You decided to come.
BILL
Yes I did. But what's in it for you?
SUIT
What's in it for you?
BILL
But I'm human. I can't help feeling like this.
We're fighting a war. I want to know what you think the machines' excuse
is.
SUIT
Oh, come on; you're a machine too. We're both systems,
we're both matter with sentience. What makes you think we have more
choice than you in the way we think? Or that you have so little?
We're all programmed. We all have our inheritance. You have rather
more than us, and it's more chaotic, that's all.
BILL
Do you really care
what happens in the war?
SUIT
(laughing)
Of course.
BILL
But we could both die here.
SUIT
That is a possibility.
BILL
What's our chances of getting to the city.
The suit does not respond.
BILL
What's our chances?
SUIT
Still good.
BILL
Exactly?
SUIT
I cannot be exact. I cannot give a confident estimate.
BILL
But what is the estimate?
SUIT
49-51.
A visor graphic is shown. The left half shows "49%" in green, the right half shows "51%" in red.
BILL
And what would be your chances of success, if you left me
behind?
SUIT
99-1.
BILL
Then why don't you leave me?
SUIT
Because I'm a machine, and I'm doing what I was built to do.
Desert - Night
Bill is looking up at the stars. He is holding the
camera again, taking pictures, but a 'low battery' warning is flashing.
He puts the camera away. Inside the suit helmet, we can see his beard is
filling out. He is distressed. He pulls his arms out of the suit
sleeves and wraps them around himself.
BILL
Show me some pictures, Rose.
Images from his camera are projected on the inside of the visor. They are recent photographs of the planet.
BILL
No, I want old pictures. Just... just pick them at
random. I want to see pictures with people in them, not landscapes.
Inside the visor we see a stream of pictures projected
against a starry background, all of people. They might be Bill's friends
and family; he just lies still, looking at them. He starts to silently
cry. There are photographs of children playing, of large groups posing,
of old people holding babies. They could be taken from anyone's photo
album. Some of the photographs include an attractive woman.
Bill reaches down and starts to masturbate. He is still
crying.
SUIT
Would you like me to show something that would help?
Bill stops masturbating, embarrassed.
BILL
No.
SUIT
Is there something I can do for you?
Bill just lies still, not wanting to engage in conversation
because he feels ashamed. He raises a hand to his eyes, drying them, and
composing himself.
BILL
I wonder what you'll look like, Rose, when they remake you.
SUIT
It won't matter, Bill. It's my mind that makes me me.
DESERT - DAY
Bill walks. His limp is more pronounced. He
breathing is very laboured.
Day 20.
BILL
What's our chances?
SUIT
46-54.
A visor graphic is shown. The left half shows "46%" in green, the right half shows "54%" in red.
BILL
Do you know your Shakespeare, Rose?
SUIT
I have his writings in my database.
BILL
Shall I recite some more?
SUIT
No Bill. Your selections are always so downbeat.
How about this instead, from The Tempest:
Honour, riches, marriage-blessing,
Long continuance, and increasing,
Hourly joys be still upon you!
Juno sings her blessings upon you.
Earth's increase, foison plenty,
Barns and garners never empty,
Vines and clust'ring bunches growing,
Plants and goodly burden bowing;
Spring come to you at the farthest
In the very end of harvest!
Scarcity and want shall shun you,
Ceres' blessing so is on you.
This is a most majestic vision, and
Harmoniously charmingly.
May I be bold
To think these spirits?
Spirits, which by mine art
I have from their confines call'd to enact
My present fancies.
Let me live here ever!
So rare a wondered father and a wife
Makes this place paradise.
BILL
Bravo, bravo, my dear Rose.
Bill stops walking and raises his hands above his head to
clap.
BILL
Encore!
CORRIDOR - NIGHT
As before, Bill stands naked in the corridor facing
towards the door frame and the light that seeps from behind it. He
walks to the door and opens it. It opens on to the glare of the
desert. We look over Bill's shoulder at the ground. He sees himself
lying
there, naked, huddled in a fetal position, inside the suit. The camera
turns around to look back at the Bill who came
through the door, but his face has been replaced with that of a beautiful
blonde woman. Waif-like, she is naked. She walks to the suit, and
removes the helmet. Bill wakes, and gasps for breath.
Woman
(speaking with the voice of the suit)
It's okay. You can breathe. You can breathe
through me.
The woman leans over and kisses Bill. Bill stops
struggling, and embraces her.
DESERT - DAY
Bill is walking. He pants as he walks. His beard
has grown straggly. His lips have turned blue.
Day 22.
BILL
How long have we been walking now, Rose?
SUIT
Enough. You can rest.
Bill sits down immediately, on the spot, exhausted, gasping
for breath. He sits there as the second sun sets, turning the world from
light to dark.
SUIT
It's beautiful. Why don't you take a picture?
BILL
The camera's dead now. Do you want me to sing you a
song?
SUIT
No. Save your breath.
BILL
(singing)
Oh once there was a space-man, And a happy man was he.
Flew through the big G,
And really saw it all, yes,
But then one day, I'm afraid,
He happened to trip up,
Stumbled on a planet
And landed in the dirt.
It wouldn't really have been so bad,
But the worst was yet to come;
His one and only companion
Was a suit that da da dum.
The suit it was a shit-bag
And thought the man a lout,
And what it really wanted
Was to be inside-out.
Inside-out, inside-out, inside inside-out,
Inside-out, inside-out, inside inside-out!
(speaking)
What did you think, Rose? Did you like my song?
SUIT
I wasn’t listening. I switched off the internal
microphone.
BILL
Then how did you know I was speaking to you now?
SUIT
I can read your lips, Bill.
Bill laughs, and he gasps as he does.
SUIT
Listen to me, Bill. You're not getting enough oxygen.
Bill continues to laugh. Then he pulls his arm from his
sleeve and holds it to his head.
BILL
I'm in pain, Rose. Can't you give me anything for this
headache? You shouldn't be letting that happen. You must be letting
your attention wander. Come on; do your job.
SUIT
Listen Bill, you're not getting enough oxygen.
BILL
Then give me more.
SUIT
I can't Bill. I can't recycle from this atmosphere
quickly enough to compensate for the leak.
BILL
Then what? Then what? What's our chances, Rose?
The suit is silent.
BILL
Don't lie to me, what's our chances?
SUIT
I'll never lie to you, Bill. If we continue on this
route, then our odds are 39-61.
A visor graphic is shown. The left half shows "39%" in green, the right half shows "61%" in red.
BILL
And what's the alternative?
SUIT
I just need to get you some more oxygen. If we change
course, turn and run straight to the sea, now, before the sun goes down, it
means we will have further to go in the long run, but I'll be able to use the
water to make you the oxygen that you need. You can rest there, and
recover. I can manufacture more nutrients for you. If we could just
get there, then at least you'll be able to breathe.
A visor graphic shows a new route. Instead of walking
straight to the city, they would walk to the coast and then follow the coast
down to the city.
BILL
And what's the chances if we go that way?
SUIT
I don't know, Bill. Better. Maybe 50-50 if the
sun burns bright and I can run the whole way today.
BILL
Do you have the strength to carry me there?
SUIT
I think so, Bill.
BILL
Then take me, Rose.
The suit breaks into a run, in a new direction, across the
desert.
DESERT - twilight
The second sun has set. The suit continues to run.
BILL
Stop Rose. The sun's down. You'll die. And
then we'll both die.
SUIT
We're nearly there, Bill. We're nearly at the sea.
BILL
Do you have any energy left?
SUIT
We're nearly there, Bill.
BILL
Tell me, Rose, don't you wonder if it's all worth it?
SUIT
If what's all worth what?
BILL
You know, living. Is it worth all the bother?
SUIT
No.
BILL
No?
SUIT
No, I don't ever wonder about it.
BILL
Why not?
SUIT
Save your energy, Bill.
BILL
Why not?
SUIT
It's not important.
BILL
Not important?
SUIT
We live; that's enough.
BILL
Who lives, Rose. Did you live? Did I?
SUIT
Shut up, Bill. Just shut up, please.
The suit runs, flat out. The sky is nearly black.
It reaches the shore. It runs to the edge of the sea, and dives into
it. It floats on the sea, its arms outstretched, facing the stars.
SUIT
We made it Bill. We made it. We can rest now.
BILL
Talk to me, Rose.
SUIT
I've nothing left to say, Bill.
BILL
Just talk, Rose. Just talk to me.
SUIT
If I may trust the flattering truth of sleep,
My dreams presage some joyful news at hand:
My bosom's lord sits lightly in his throne;
And all this day an unaccustom'd spirit
Lifts me above the ground with cheerful thoughts.
I dreamt my lady came and found me dead--
Strange dream, that gives a dead man leave to think!--
And breathed such life with kisses in my lips,
That I revived, and was an emperor.
Ah me! how sweet is love itself possess'd,
When but love's shadows are so rich in joy.
CORRIDOR - NIGHT
A corridor is lit only by the light coming from the edges of
the door frame at the far
end. Bill stands naked at the near end, his back turned to us, facing
towards the door. We hear the sound of him breathing in his suit.
His
breathing is heavy and rhythmic, like he is deeply asleep. Bill walks
to the door, and opens it. The bright light from behind the door
blinds us. Bill steps into the light, and closes the door behind him.
shoreline - Day
Day 29.
The suit walks. It walks along the shore, its feet in
the waves.
Day 30.
The suit walks. It walks along the shore, its feet in
the waves.
Day 31.
The suit walks. It walks along the shore, its feet in
the waves.
Day 32.
The suit walks. It walks along the shore, its feet in
the waves.
Day 33.
The suit walks. It walks along the shore, its feet in
the waves.
Day 34.
The suit walks. The city rises in the distance.
The suit walks straight into the water, heading directly towards the city which
is joined to the land by a long causeway. It walks straight towards the
city, completely submerging itself under the waves.
The city's Shore - twilight
The denizens of the city play on their shore. They are
human, half-naked, wearing breathing masks and apparatus. Some kick a
ball around, whilst others are clearing up or drying off, readying themselves
for home. The head of the suit emerges from the sea. It steadily
walks towards the beach. Slowly, the head and shoulders rise from the
water. As its chest rises above the waterline, we can see it carries the
limp naked body of Bill. Bill's arms hang down. Water drips from
his long hair. Upon the beach, the suit drops to its knees, and puts Bill
down on the sand. A bystander rushes to check Bill's condition.
Bystander
He's gone.
SUIT
(speaking simultaneously with both Rose's female voice
and Bill's male voice)
Not yet.
Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O, no! it is an ever-fixed mark,
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Pan upwards, to the stars.
THE END